22a: Elevator Pitch #3
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=1zKW4A1v-l8
Reflection
- From my feedback from before I took into account my peer's thoughts on how I could dive into my idea more and undercover less surface level material. For example, with location wise, analyzing the pro's and con's of North Campus vs South Campus. Also, looking into the future as to if I would like to expand my business in multiple areas with multiple locations.
- Looking back on my first two elevator pitches, I'm definitely more confident with my words nowadays and my ability to present them to an audience. I still need to dive more in depth though and not only cover surface level material but more in depth topics.
- Not to much of the information surprised me to be honest, it was all good information.
Reflection
- From my feedback from before I took into account my peer's thoughts on how I could dive into my idea more and undercover less surface level material. For example, with location wise, analyzing the pro's and con's of North Campus vs South Campus. Also, looking into the future as to if I would like to expand my business in multiple areas with multiple locations.
- Looking back on my first two elevator pitches, I'm definitely more confident with my words nowadays and my ability to present them to an audience. I still need to dive more in depth though and not only cover surface level material but more in depth topics.
- Not to much of the information surprised me to be honest, it was all good information.
Hey Evan,
ReplyDeleteGood job with your elevator pitch 3. I thought you did a good job explaining your idea and specifically how it out competes the potential competitors that are already in this field at UF. If you slowed down a little and took your time, it would probably benefit your post and also lengthen the time it takes to get it done. Over-all great job!
Hi Evan! I really love your business idea, and I like the ideas that you projected through your elevator pitch. I think you could have slowed down so that people could understand you better and also let the information you’re talking about sink in. You have a little extra time since the pitch was only about 40 seconds long. Other than that, you did a great job!
ReplyDeleteHi Evan,
ReplyDeleteI really enjoyed your elevator pitch. You did a great job at attracting the audience's attention with your hook before introducing your self. I also like that your pitch was very smooth and prepared yet it did not sound memorized. Also, you did a good job of continuously looking at the camera which is important when using notes.