17A - Elevator Pitch #2
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=1zKW4A1v-l8
Reflection
- The most important feedback I received was the perspective that my peers thought my idea was different, and there was an opportunity if formed in the correct way.
- What surprised me the most was they mentioned to have more confidence when I spoke in order to sound more valid
- Silly feedback was just to have fun when I'm presenting
- Most useful information was just to be confident because we are all selling something vital and important
- From my previous feedback I learned all of these things depicted above, and to have fun while doing it.
Reflection
- The most important feedback I received was the perspective that my peers thought my idea was different, and there was an opportunity if formed in the correct way.
- What surprised me the most was they mentioned to have more confidence when I spoke in order to sound more valid
- Silly feedback was just to have fun when I'm presenting
- Most useful information was just to be confident because we are all selling something vital and important
- From my previous feedback I learned all of these things depicted above, and to have fun while doing it.
Hey Evan,
ReplyDeleteGood job with the elevator pitch 2! You did a much better job explaining this opportunity in depth and telling us how you think this can succeed specifically in Gainesville. Reading from the aid is better than what I did because you know what you will say before the video gets rolling. Great job on this post and you definitely sold me on this idea.
Hi Evan!
ReplyDeleteI was very impressed with how relaxed, confident and strong your elevator pitch was! You seem very enthusiastic about your idea which makes the elevator pitch all the more convincing. I also was impressed with how you had a hook and then proceeded to introduce yourself. This is something I didn't think about doing but will include next time.
Hey Evan!
ReplyDeleteGreat job on your second elevator pitch! When compared with your first elevator pitch, it is obvious that you have become very comfortable with being in front of the camera. You have projected your voice enough so that the viewers can hear and understand everything you are saying. One thing I would note is to make more eye contact with the individual. Overall, great job!