I thought you spoke very well and were very enthusiastic about your product! It definitely seemed like you knew what you were doing and the points you wanted the audience to remember. The only thing you could work on is using the notes more as an aid and not reading directly off of them! This was part was hard for me as well because I am still learning how to become a better public speaker so I always need to have some notes to read off of.
I found your elevator pitch to be very interesting because you were able to communicate your product in an enthusiastic way. I think you did a very good job the only thing was the you did not dress professionally and you relied heavily on your notes. I also had trouble with this, but I learned that if you re read over your pitch a few times before it was easier to not look down at my notes as often as just glancing.
Great job! This opportunity definitely exists and could completely change how successful a corporation is. This looked very professional and complete compared to mine. The notes were definitely a good idea and I should have used them for my pitch. You knew exactly what to say and when to say it with the aid of your notes. Maybe for the next pitch you can put the notes on your computer screen and read from there.
Hey Evan! Your pitch was probably the best that I have seen so far! You talked very clearly and enunciated all of your words. You seem very passionate about your product, which is exactly what is needed when completing a pitch. One thing I would encourage you to do when completing the next pitch would be to make more eye contact with the people you are trying to pitch to. Instead of looking at your papers the entire time, try looking at them when necessary. Overall, great job!
Hi Evan!
ReplyDeleteI thought you spoke very well and were very enthusiastic about your product! It definitely seemed like you knew what you were doing and the points you wanted the audience to remember. The only thing you could work on is using the notes more as an aid and not reading directly off of them! This was part was hard for me as well because I am still learning how to become a better public speaker so I always need to have some notes to read off of.
Hey Evan!
ReplyDeleteI found your elevator pitch to be very interesting because you were able to communicate your product in an enthusiastic way. I think you did a very good job the only thing was the you did not dress professionally and you relied heavily on your notes. I also had trouble with this, but I learned that if you re read over your pitch a few times before it was easier to not look down at my notes as often as just glancing.
Hey Evan,
ReplyDeleteGreat job! This opportunity definitely exists and could completely change how successful a corporation is. This looked very professional and complete compared to mine. The notes were definitely a good idea and I should have used them for my pitch. You knew exactly what to say and when to say it with the aid of your notes. Maybe for the next pitch you can put the notes on your computer screen and read from there.
Hey Evan!
ReplyDeleteYour pitch was probably the best that I have seen so far! You talked very clearly and enunciated all of your words. You seem very passionate about your product, which is exactly what is needed when completing a pitch. One thing I would encourage you to do when completing the next pitch would be to make more eye contact with the people you are trying to pitch to. Instead of looking at your papers the entire time, try looking at them when necessary. Overall, great job!